you know is that like that epitome for your next you know major life decision as you know like apply for this college as opposed to a bunch of less effective moments so you want to really specify one specific moment in your life and that really you know like strengthens that one moment number three you want to choose a topic that will highlight who you are talk about your personal you know life history and your experience based beliefs you should come at it from a creative angle and talk about you know your other life achievements or educational moments and avoid talking about your educational records such as those not so flawless high school grades because let's face it we're not all a 4.0 GPA students here even if you have stellar grades so many students take that as their main angle of approach and although it is effective let's face it most high school students don't finish with that perfect GPA a lot of those students still get into those top tier schools how do you think they do that well College Admission essays are one of those key factors number four coherency coherency is so damn important as much as officers want you to know and want to know what you have to say you have to keep things filtered you can't just ramble and stuff you got to keep the order of your sentences logical and consistent so make sure you use proper grammar and like spellcheck you shut guys like come on like don't be lazy like it takes a few minutes keep the stuff looking nice and clean and organized also avoid the thesaurus although you may think you sound like someone straight out of Shakespeare sometimes it just makes it look like kind of an ass now I'm not saying the only fourth grade vocabulary but don't go too crazy with the stuff either you are a high school student entering college not 40 year old dude applying for a position in neurosurgery number five give off the likable personality vibe so let's face it colleges see themselves as big ass young adult communities where people party you know work together build connections and all that good stuff universities want to see students who are willing to dive head into the action and spice up the mixing pot of different personalities so this vibe can and should be suppli included as part of your anecdote remember we talked about that before also adding small little you know word jabs into the essay strengthens the point is pretty helpful as well number six six okay you should use originality to get out of the herd of sheep you guys know what that is so considering the fact that the admission officer reads tons of essays every single day the majority of them get into that passable section the essay wasn't terrible it was just incredibly average and you know really took no stand on anything colleges are huge brain storming clouds and universities want various opinions and arguments on all sorts of topics that's why they're so unique and diverse writing about things like politics religion other controversial topics (if u can’t write essays on different topics u can use the service to which students CheetahPapers research paper pay) can be effective on giving you the boost to get out of that passable section and into the oh wow section as long as you don't go overboard and are considered towards others opinions which is important show that your statements are logical and reasonable and that you aren't just a spastic Rambler number seven show don't tell give example they say actions speak louder than words right you bet your ass they do and this is where you exemplify this instead of stating that you like